Character Creation Help

[iD/sR/sT]

Name: Clare Sanders
Gender: Male
Age: 13
chumHandle=inevitableDestruction
Typing Style=You often forget all punctuation except capitalization
Interests=Gardening, knitting, and games

Personality=He tries to help people so much that he doesn't notice his own problems.

He is a Knight of Doom
Strife specibus=Chainkind and Boomerangkind
Action modus=Items are assigned actions and performing that action launches the items out of the sylladex.
Moon=Derse

Please give any advice you have on improving him.

[philosophicalServant]

I like it, good job. Two things though.

1a.) /"He hates harming anything living, no matter what it is."\
A pacifist run isn't impossible, but it's damn tough. Be ready for that.
Also adding the Roleplaying system, both your title and aspect will conflict, have fun though.

My other problem is the prototyping.
You may or may not have royally screwed yourself and the others within your session. (97% Screwed rating)

1b.) The TV. I will give this tip only once.
Never, EVER, prototype anything that has to do with Video Games, TV, Anime, or Pop-culture.
Just don't.
2b.) You are aware that prototyping things that are alive is bad news bears, right?
Bad news bears indeed.

[iD/sR/sT]

Nov 17, 2013 0:02:33 GMT -5 philosophicalServant said:

I like it, good job. Two things though.

Ok I fixed prototyping and personality. As for aspect and title I was thinking of weaponizing doom, bringing doom to foes, defending from doom, etc. Thanks.